Not bad dude, I actually quite like it

Only a few minor points:
-The vocal has been used too much already in earlier tracks as stated above, and the track doesn't really need it, so I suggest that you replace it with a different one or remove it all together.
-The low band noise, or what's it called is not a bad addition, only I wouldn't use it together with the kicks.
-The kick lacks punch, try to layer it some more and use an equalizer and a compressor to amplify the lower frequencies. This would also call for you to remove the wind-noise from the punching parts.
-And a few sounds what can be highlighted a bit more to improve the contrast between bass & sound.
Overally I like what you've done here, great atmosphere!