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Revolting against wat voor muziek was dat op dat filmpje
This sounds like you understand how to build a track, yet have failed to do so with the right sounds. As stated by others in this topic, this could 'be something', once you give it all a boost. The arrangement is quite okay, as I can judge from previews anyway. the "go" vocal should go, as should the quadrafuzz-kick variations. Quadrafuzz sounds as you use it are sóóóó 2003, if you know what I mean. ;
as it sounds right now, it's quite 'soft' and mild. your kick isn't a kick at the moment. I miss entertainment all around. The track doesn't attack me. You're trying to touch my soul, but you hardly reach it. Boost all sounds up. Give your own vocal more power, add distortion to it to give it more punch.
Your second melody has to be changed to a 3/4-line. Also.. your break could have been something when you had the synth fade in DURING the singing, not after. It seems as though the singing part of One Republic is an intermezzo, it has nothing to do with your track as it stands now. You should either add more hardcore elements to it (claps, sounds, whatever) or indeed have the melody fade in. You also don't work towards a climax - you need to give people the feeling that the part with kicks is coming, you have to raise tension. You can achieve this by having your synth "glide" (from low octaves to high) in the last pattern before the melody with kick-part. Read your synth manual on instructions how to do this.
Also, the track sounds quite flat - be sure to use reverb (modestly, ofcourse) and sound effects; sparsely but effectively, if you catch my drift.
Wrapping it up - you have understood how to arrange a track, so composing is no problem. Now it's your sound architecture that needs polishing. Put simply - you have understood how to bake an egg, now it's time to learn to cook a complete meal.
But I'm sure you'll get there... you're halfway there. Good luck!
wie dit in mekaar heeft gefixt heeft ook een zieke geest let vooral wat later in het filmpje op, psycho shit 
http://fr.youtube.com/watch?v=L6SJPhjn8Yc&eurl=https://partyflock.nl/topic/822281/PAGE/567.html
wond ken dan weer open gaan en ontsteken enzo
neuhhh als ik nou ga zuipen ken ik straks misschien paar weken niet zuipen, dus dan maar beter effe 1 weekje rustig aan doen
Een soort russische "hardhouse", ben de naam van de stijl vergeten. Is behoorlijk populair daar. M´n russische vrienden luisteren er in ieder geval naar.
heb je effe een linkje naar zo'n track ?
De Project Hardcore anthem is hier te luisteren: http://www.myspace.com/officialb2s
i've really appreciated them.. naturally the preview version was not the final version and i also had in my mind to add,modify and change some things in the track but i'm already happy that you like the track.. i will keep your kind advices and i'll try to make it better Personally i don´t like the vocal that is used in the intro
Trouwens vanaf 30 seconden lijkt het wel of ze Disorder van Mad Dog gekopieërd hebben, vind het er wel heel erg op lijken..
Lekker anthem naar mijn mening
beter als Come As One die kan ik wel schijten 
De Project Hardcore anthem
De Project Hardcore anthem is hier te luisteren: http://www.myspace.com/officialb2s
, ik vind hem alleen wat simpel klinken eigenlijk.Gek feest was dat ook
melodie heeft wat weg van Korsakoff - My Empty Bottle (DJ D Remix)
Disorder van Mad Dog gekopieërd
De Project Hardcore anthem is hier te luisteren: http://www.myspace.com/officialb2s
