Hi guys, here is a preview of my first track together with Dj Thunder where we taken the sample of Apologize 
Nightmare Dj vs Dj Thunder - It's too late
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=4FQDEZ2T
Naturally it's not the final version, and advices (in english) are always welcome also because it's our first track 2gether,but i hope you like it, specially the climax in the break 
greetings from Italy!
Decent first work there, comrado italiano.
This sounds like you understand how to build a track, yet have failed to do so with the right sounds. As stated by others in this topic, this could 'be something', once you give it all a boost. The arrangement is quite okay, as I can judge from previews anyway. the "go" vocal should go, as should the quadrafuzz-kick variations. Quadrafuzz sounds as you use it are sóóóó 2003, if you know what I mean. ;
as it sounds right now, it's quite 'soft' and mild. your kick isn't a kick at the moment. I miss entertainment all around. The track doesn't attack me. You're trying to touch my soul, but you hardly reach it. Boost all sounds up. Give your own vocal more power, add distortion to it to give it more punch.
Your second melody has to be changed to a 3/4-line. Also.. your break could have been something when you had the synth fade in DURING the singing, not after. It seems as though the singing part of One Republic is an intermezzo, it has nothing to do with your track as it stands now. You should either add more hardcore elements to it (claps, sounds, whatever) or indeed have the melody fade in. You also don't work towards a climax - you need to give people the feeling that the part with kicks is coming, you have to raise tension. You can achieve this by having your synth "glide" (from low octaves to high) in the last pattern before the melody with kick-part. Read your synth manual on instructions how to do this.
Also, the track sounds quite flat - be sure to use reverb (modestly, ofcourse) and sound effects; sparsely but effectively, if you catch my drift.
Wrapping it up - you have understood how to arrange a track, so composing is no problem. Now it's your sound architecture that needs polishing. Put simply - you have understood how to bake an egg, now it's time to learn to cook a complete meal.
But I'm sure you'll get there... you're halfway there. Good luck!