{Hardstyle}

Hello

I've created my second track today, took me a long time asswell!
i like this one very much, i hope pavo likes it ass well!
enjoy everybody!

http://www.speedyshare.com/139540381.html

cava?

Uitspraak van Je'Moi op woensdag 30 mei 2007 om 21:42:

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cava?

liever echte champagne

Uitspraak van Je'Moi op woensdag 30 mei 2007 om 21:42:

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, i hope pavo likes it up his ass

Uitspraak van Je'Moi op woensdag 30 mei 2007 om 21:42:

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cava?

cavia?

? please can you put normal reviews! i dont understand

c'est plus bien que le premier de toi

vous aiment la voie ?

{rofl}.

The kick that goes with the melody, sounds more like a jump kick than a hardstyle kick. Not that that's a problem... It might just not be your intention.

hmm ok, not intention no

Uitspraak van Je'Moi op woensdag 30 mei 2007 om 21:53:

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vous aiment la voie ?

un peut

lol merci!

I don't like the kick, and the afmix is very slecht.

merde de bison

Uitspraak van Je'Moi op woensdag 30 mei 2007 om 22:28:

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merde de bison

Uitspraak van José con Barba op woensdag 30 mei 2007 om 22:25:

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I don't like the kick, and the afmix is very slecht.

idem..

Dmx cutted sounds good, but the bass is to dry, and you need to put the volume of ure vocals up. Ure strings are dry, use others and boost them. Your melody is oke, but your synths need some tuning to. This song needs a BIGG update, and than it will sounds WAY better. keep it up and good luck

Too much punch in the kick or too little low, try layaring a kick underneath with the high freqencies filtered and the low ends boosted...

Maybe a little reverb over them...

You could use some more cymbals and percussion... maybe some edits (with some distorded kicks) at the end of the bars...

The melody is nice, only the string and the lead-synth sound very clean...

You need to rough it up a little more...


The base is very good, now you need to get the it to sound well too...

Nice intro, played well with the vocal

That kick sounds great, maybe youmight add a little more bassboost in the lower frequency-range.
The break comes a little bit too sudden, maybe you may extend the time till you mix it over; but its a very very nice break!!
The synth that continues your track is nice as well, then the break comes back and maintains! It sounds really oke!

Structure of this track: Perfect!
Nice track

One comment: Try to improve your panning-settings, it all comes out of the middle, sounds a little mono, and at least i would advise to add some more bass to your track (mastering may be a little bit better)

Keep up the good work